Feedback time!

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Rakuen Revolution Feedback Meme

That's right, kids! It's that time again, time for our Feedback Meme! Post here to receive concrit! Posting is optional, but if you'd like feedback and advice on your characters, here's where you can find it.

★ Be constructive with criticism. If you have a criticism, make sure to include how they can improve on that point!
☆ Feel free to just post compliments if you can't think of any concrit. ♥
★ Anonymous commenting is enabled, but the same rules apply. If a comment is out of order, we'll delete it.
☆ You can also link to the HMD post in your profile
★ Leave feedback on our modding, too! The first comment is for you to point out where we can improve on running the game as mods, and the second is for aspects of the game themselves.

Comments

[fracturedsoul]

Can I just say I really enjoy your Dave? Like, a lot. I love playing with you.

Although. I think you maybe use punctuation a little too much with him. The impression I get is he shouldn't really use question marks unless the question he's asking would be mistakable for a statement without them, buuuut then again he did use lots of punctuation earlier on in the series and it gradually vanished so who knows. Just wanted to point this out!

[knightime]

Oh no, i've been slowly trying to back off on punctuation with him. It's hard finding a middle point for it but I'll do my best to rectify it!

Fucking quirks how do they work. :|

But thanks for mentioning it! I'll do my best to fix it.