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Rakuen Revolution Feedback Meme

That's right, kids! It's that time again, time for our Feedback Meme! Post here to receive concrit! Posting is optional, but if you'd like feedback and advice on your characters, here's where you can find it.

★ Be constructive with criticism. If you have a criticism, make sure to include how they can improve on that point!
☆ Feel free to just post compliments if you can't think of any concrit. ♥
★ Anonymous commenting is enabled, but the same rules apply. If a comment is out of order, we'll delete it.
☆ You can also link to the HMD post in your profile
★ Leave feedback on our modding, too! The first comment is for you to point out where we can improve on running the game as mods, and the second is for aspects of the game themselves.

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Ketsu

[fracturedsoul]

Dirk Strider | Homestuck | Fortitude
Golbez | Final Fantasy IV | Conquest
Lemina Ausa | Lunar 2 | Conquest

Lay it on me.

[straightupzorra]

I think Dirk is really great, he's like just the perfect mix of like, cool kid Strider while simultaneously mindfucking everyone (seriously, imaginary Raks, you're amazing). I just wanted to say you're doing a great job of rping a Alpha kid.

owo

[fracturedsoul]

That means a lot to me because I'm pretty much always nervous I'm doing it wrong WHY ARE YOU RPING FROM AN ONGOING SERIES KNOWN FOR ITS MINDFUCKERY, KETSU but yeah I'm glad you enjoy him! Thanks so much.

Kim

[knightime]

[AU]Dave Strider (knightime) | Homestuck | Fortitude

[theillbeatknight]

I really like your Dave. He makes me nervous about my bizarre AU version.

[knightime]

Oh gosh, don't be nervous at all! I know I've been slow with our threads but I've really enjoyed them for now! You're doing fine!!!

[fracturedsoul]

Can I just say I really enjoy your Dave? Like, a lot. I love playing with you.

Although. I think you maybe use punctuation a little too much with him. The impression I get is he shouldn't really use question marks unless the question he's asking would be mistakable for a statement without them, buuuut then again he did use lots of punctuation earlier on in the series and it gradually vanished so who knows. Just wanted to point this out!

[knightime]

Oh no, i've been slowly trying to back off on punctuation with him. It's hard finding a middle point for it but I'll do my best to rectify it!

Fucking quirks how do they work. :|

But thanks for mentioning it! I'll do my best to fix it.

Katy

[swordofzero]

Dunleavy Mallorough (Staff-AU) | musicalee | The Hero Series | Mayor
Day (Staff-AU) | kingofpoisons | Best Served Cold | Headmistress of Conquest
Suzaku Kururugi (OU) | swordofzero | Code Geass | Conquest
Kotaro Mochizuki (OU) | babysage | Black Blood Brothers | Conquest
Shion (OU) | savedbyasong | No. 6 | Fortitude
Merlin (OU) | secretlyuseful | Merlin | Fortitude

[unflinchable]

I know you told me that you were a little unsure about Merlin's voice, but I think you're spot on and every tag I get from him I can just hear his voice. I'm happy I enabled you.

[fracturedsoul]

I've mentioned this recently, but you are great at everyone you pick up. I am especially blown away by your Suzaku, goddamn. You have him down pat.

[forthward]

Nunnally vi Britannia | Code Geass | Conquest

Ru

[unflinchable]

Santana Lopez (Staff AU) | straightupzorra | Glee | Conquest
Dolorosa (Staff AU) | mamarosa | Homestuck | Fortitude
Yuki Yagizawa (OU) | anotherpath | Shitsurakuen | Conquest
Daenerys Targaryen (OU) | bloodandfire | ASOIAF | Fortitude
Anya Alstreim (OU) | brbdocumenting | Code Geass | Fortitude
Arthur Pendragon (OU) | unflinchable | Merlin | Conquest

Emely

[scavenges]

Nepeta Vantas [AU] | scavenges | Homestuck | Conquest

Heron

[theillbeatknight]

David Strider (AU) | theillbeatknight | Homestuck/The Once and Future King | Fortitude
Stellaluna | vespertinity | Stellaluna | Conquest

[greenspaces]

Jade Harley (AU) | greenspaces | Homestuck