utopiamods: (mod sage)
Rakuen Moderators ([personal profile] utopiamods) wrote in [community profile] rakuen_ooc2011-01-16 02:11 am
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HMD #1

the Utopia HMD meme



That's right, kids! We asked, you agreed, and now we're running a feedback post until the end of the beta for that last-minute fine-tuning of all your colourful characters. Or just for everyone else to gush over them. Both are equally valid uses of this meme.

★ Be constructive with criticism. If you have a criticism, make sure to include how they can improve on that point!
☆ Feel free to just post compliments if you can't think of any concrit. ♥
★ Anonymous commenting is enabled, but the same rules apply. If a comment is out of order, we'll delete it.

★ Leave feedback on our modding, too! The first comment is for you to point out where we can improve on running the game as mods, and the second is for aspects of the game themselves.
forthward: (08)

orz

[personal profile] forthward 2011-01-16 02:23 am (UTC)(link)
Crits self: Be more active. :|
queenscheckmate: we are young (softly with words that flow; sincere)

[personal profile] queenscheckmate 2011-01-16 02:39 am (UTC)(link)
You guys are great. Really. I MEAN THAT. Putting this all together, I love you guys for it. So I thank you guys for coming up with this and putting it all together.

The only suggestion I would give is that to make yourself a little more known. I know there's more than one mod and the only person I tend to go to is Elle because I don't remember who the rest of you guys are. ;A; That's partially my fault, but I'm not sure if I'm the only one who might feel that way. SO I'M JUST PUTTING IT OUT THERE.

isur2ndprincess: (well actually)

[personal profile] isur2ndprincess 2011-01-16 05:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I guess this could belong in either the Mod thread of the Game thread, but I'm wondering what you guys are doing to advertise the game and generate interest in it? I know that we're still in beta and slowly growing but... I am nosy and curious :|b

OTHER THAN THAT. I think you guys are doing really well, I think you're all really approachable and easy to talk to. Keep being awesome ♥

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Re: MOD FEEDBACK

[personal profile] swordofzero 2011-01-16 07:23 pm (UTC)(link)
YOU GUYS ARE AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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bitofafiction: Distracted, startled, perhaps even confused. (>= and some are merely spaced)

Re: GAME FEEDBACK

[personal profile] bitofafiction 2011-01-16 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
I admit, looking at how fast the first floor dorms have filled up, it worries me knowing there are only two more floors. Do you guys have a plan for what happens if we get over 120 pups in the game?

/asks all of the weird questions

/always

/forever

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myownfuture: (Default)

[personal profile] myownfuture 2011-01-16 02:25 am (UTC)(link)
Ketsu plays:

Fletcher Tringham ([personal profile] greennotgold)
Reiko Date ([personal profile] myownfuture)
bitofafiction: Smiling: fond amusement. (!= that was Victorian)

[personal profile] bitofafiction 2011-01-16 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
Fletcher is d'aww ♥

that is all.

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allurprincess: (ohhhhhh.)

ELLE: Sora, Gino, Kotarou

[personal profile] allurprincess 2011-01-16 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
Sora Himoto[personal profile] allurprincess ☆ Shitsurakuen

Gino Weinberg[personal profile] trollofthree ☆ Code Geass

Kotarou[personal profile] tenwholeryou ☆ Sword of the Stranger
stopwatch: (shy)

[personal profile] stopwatch 2011-01-16 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
Your Gino is perfectly on the mark. You get his goofiness and formality down in the right parts. On top of that he's a lot of fun to tag with! But this applies to Sora and Kotarou too.

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stopwatch: (gay blanket fun)

[personal profile] stopwatch 2011-01-16 02:27 am (UTC)(link)
HI HMD MEME

seki plays:

Euphemia li Britannia ([personal profile] themerryway)
Rolo Lamperouge ([personal profile] stopwatch)
Oichi ([personal profile] themouthofhell)
allurprincess: (iluuuuuuu)

[personal profile] allurprincess 2011-01-16 02:43 am (UTC)(link)
Your Euphie, my god. ; ; I'm especially looking forward to seeing her as a Player, but all of her interactions are adorable.

WILL COMMENT ABOUT ROLO WHEN I'VE SEEN MORE OF HIM you're doing good so far. :|b

Oichiiii I am totally canon-blind re: Sengoku Basara but I'm loving her as a character, and her CR with Kotarou was a total surprise but a really pleasant one.

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queenscheckmate: we are young (go ahead speak; for i am listening)

cel ; Kallen Stadtfeld (Kozuki)

[personal profile] queenscheckmate 2011-01-16 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
/crits self.

/tells self to be less active.
allurprincess: (ilu the MOSTEST)

[personal profile] allurprincess 2011-01-16 03:28 am (UTC)(link)
/superactive high-five

I really like your Kallen! I think the only thing I get confused about is how to motivate her into participating in Exaclan. Maybe she needs to run into Lelouch properly? IDK I'm enjoying her, especially with Kotarou. ♥

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forthward: (Default)

[personal profile] forthward 2011-01-16 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
Cesia plays:

Nunnally vi Britannia ([personal profile] forthward)
greennotgold: (Shy)

[personal profile] greennotgold 2011-01-16 07:33 pm (UTC)(link)
Crit: Be more active.

I love your Nunnally and would love to see her around more!

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Re: <-- I am Pyth and this is mine

(Anonymous) 2011-01-16 03:46 am (UTC)(link)
I have some reservations about tagging Sherlock. He seems like a cool character, but from the way you talk about him in chat (and the other OC you were thinking of apping too) it seems like you aren't as interested in playing him as a character as you are in showing everyone how special and awesome he is.

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imperceptible: (Smile / Bathed in sunlight.)

[personal profile] imperceptible 2011-01-16 02:33 am (UTC)(link)
Aki

Tougyu Shiro ♣ [personal profile] frozen_desires
Kevin Smith ♣ [personal profile] imperceptible


They also both have HMD posts in their respective journals if you prefer that way.
allurprincess: (yeah just be yourself)

[personal profile] allurprincess 2011-01-16 02:53 am (UTC)(link)
TOUGYU you've put so much thought into him that I'm always kind of... in awe of his tags. GOOD JOB CARRY ON 8|b

KEVIN I'm canonblind but he's adorable. I'd love to see him in more things, so if you ever have trouble with that I can have Gino drag him places? At some point he's going to demand he teach him how to play tennis, fair warning.

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siscon: (( 04 ))

[personal profile] siscon 2011-01-16 02:41 am (UTC)(link)
A-Ahhhh

Ruri plays:

Hiyo Shishidou | [personal profile] siscon
allurprincess: (pic#697450)

[personal profile] allurprincess 2011-01-16 02:57 am (UTC)(link)
THEY NEED TO INTERACT... I mean I stalked the heck out of her thread with Fletcher and am doing the same with her maths class threads but she needs to actually run into Sora for epic-level misunderstandings and drama.

I really like how you're balancing her friendly act with her issues, though, seriously.

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RURI THE II

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willbeurprincess: (pic#698004)

[personal profile] willbeurprincess 2011-01-16 03:06 am (UTC)(link)
Koharu Izaki [Shitsurakuen]

Rapunzel [Tangled]

Note to self, tag more.
isur2ndprincess: (Default)

[personal profile] isur2ndprincess 2011-01-16 05:53 pm (UTC)(link)
As I go on my crit is getting lazier and lazier, oops.

Your Koharu is adorable and so is Rapunzel, though I don't think you're doing enough oh shit outside is so cool and class is so cool with her as you should be, but like you said you need to tag more so I'm sure you'll get there ♥

♥♥♥
dancingflames: (【Frazzled】 Being chewed out)

Even though I just joined and only have two threads so far:

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Char-

Mai Tokiha | [personal profile] dancingflames | Mai-HiME
willbeurprincess: (pic#698004)

[personal profile] willbeurprincess 2011-01-16 08:31 pm (UTC)(link)
FROM WHAT I SEE, she seems spot on for the situation and her character <3 Much awesomes.

/needs to stalk moar
defender: (nice to meet you)

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Shoujou | [personal profile] defender
frozen_desires: (near the scar)

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I WANT TO THREAD WITH YOU SO BAD. THIS IS ALL.

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warpwhatsir: (☆ GIGGLE or something.)

Hikaru Sulu

[personal profile] warpwhatsir 2011-01-16 03:22 am (UTC)(link)
Hit me with your best shot DUH DUH DUH DUUUUUUH WHY DON'T YOU HIT ME WITH YOUR BEST-- /shot
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bitofafiction: Smiling: fond amusement. (!= that was Victorian)

[personal profile] bitofafiction 2011-01-16 11:40 am (UTC)(link)
SULU.

SULU SULU SULU.

He is such a derp and such a badass and is in fact generally fantastic! Well done! Top marks! *draws a tiny little checkmark on his nose*

what is this 'crit' of which you speak

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queenscheckmate: we are young (go ahead speak; for i am listening)

[personal profile] queenscheckmate 2011-01-16 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I love them both. End of story. And we need more Yuki and Kallen, just saying. Threading them trying to teach Kallen how to use a bra would be hilarious. Just saying.

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Re: Ru: Yuki + Molly

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Mei Chang | [personal profile] idkmybffxiao
isur2ndprincess: (Default)

[personal profile] isur2ndprincess 2011-01-16 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
LaLa~ Your Mei is so adorable and I think you're doing wonderfully~

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dominates: (pic#)

[personal profile] dominates 2011-01-16 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
El | [personal profile] persuades/[personal profile] dominates

sob inb4 be more active
frozen_desires: (denial in all forms)

[personal profile] frozen_desires 2011-01-16 09:19 am (UTC)(link)
I would just like to inform you that I am so happy you're playing El. *A* I cannot wait to thread with him!

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scott_pilgrim: (\grinning)

[personal profile] scott_pilgrim 2011-01-16 06:06 am (UTC)(link)
Just this guy.

> > I know I need to become more active and less slow and stuff. So if you can give me some hints for that, I'd be really gratful. Cheers!
greennotgold: (Honest smile)

[personal profile] greennotgold 2011-01-16 07:35 pm (UTC)(link)
I love your Scott, so seeing him be more active would be really great! It's not entirely your fault, things are kind of hazy and fumbly right now due to the game just getting off the ground. Everyone seems really open to tagging open logs, though, so maybe if you made one of those? I'd tag it for sure if you did.
summerstars: (Default)

Chibi: Grenn

[personal profile] summerstars 2011-01-16 11:19 am (UTC)(link)
>___>

(Also Huashi, but I haven't done much with her yet, soooo)
isur2ndprincess: (Default)

Re: Chibi: Grenn

[personal profile] isur2ndprincess 2011-01-16 05:50 pm (UTC)(link)
I ship them like crazy 8Db

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swordofzero: (Default)

Katy: Suzaku and Romeo

[personal profile] swordofzero 2011-01-16 07:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Kururugi Suzaku [personal profile] swordofzero Code Geass
Romeo [personal profile] myblueskies Romeo's Blue Skies
themerryway: ([?] - like a lover 1/2)

[personal profile] themerryway 2011-01-16 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
You're really fun to tag with, and very active! Your characterization also is very much on the mark, but your spelling and grammar isn't at the same level. You seem to mix up e's and a's a lot (for example, deap instead of deep), and run ons seem to be a problem too.

I can recommend Firefox, an internet browser that has a built in spell-check. I use it and it's wonderful! If you are using IE I can also recommend this. Comments on DW also have a checkbox that says "check spelling", which you could also use.

For grammar a program like MS Word can help, or some online grammar checks. I hope this can help you improve!

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firstlady: (Default)

[personal profile] firstlady 2011-01-25 05:57 pm (UTC)(link)
/slithers in

Haruka Kuchinawa | [personal profile] firstlady | Shitsurakuen

in b4 stop molesting El